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Star Struck
by Ian Connell
Description
Limo driver picks up his favorite celebrity
Comments
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Clinton Cas
When the driver looks back at the road between F0-F34, it looks really good, nice movement from the car shaking and the driver. Awesome piece
Beth Rowe
Some parts seemed to be blocked still. The characters could have also been positioned better to draw the eye to each other when talking. Try also focusing on the lip sync since this is one of the first things you notice. Letters such as B in belt a W in what an honour. Weren’t emphasised enough. These words are important since the character emphasises these most out of the whole sentence.