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Newer Understanding..

by TrendyGk

Final Rating: 3.69. Finished #39 out of 53 entries.

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Animator

TrendyGk

Experience

Beginner

Time Taken

15days on-off

Description

Mother-Daughter are in converstation, Mum is stressed & upset cause of Work, family stuff, & wants the daughter to understand make something more useful for her life. but daughter convinces her mum to see the bigger picture.

Comments

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jem

Characters are a little static, they could just a little more movement. Good start!

Sophia

nice setting! lip sync needs some work though

Craig Martin

Its a believable scene you've created but the acting was a bit lacking for me. I feel that good acting is where you can turn off the volume and you'd still be able to get a sense of the relationship and the moods and characters but I couldn't quiiiite get there with this one.

Sabrina

Not bad, just change the ending where the mom is more concerned and not looking up at the sky

steven

Your characters I think are too stiff at times but like the key poses