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Description
Abigail spends most of her time with her turtles, worrying her mother
Comments
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Richard Adams
Good composition, like the setting and idea. Main problem is the movements are very, very floaty.
Craig Martin
Yeah it just felt like the characters floated between each pose too much. Working on your spacing could help.
Taylor
The frog and turtle distract from the character performance. I liked your mothers acting. Try snapping the lip-sync a bit quicker :)