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Metric of success
by Largav
SFM animation using Half-Life 2 characters.
I think I spent a little too much time blocking so I didn't have much time polishing it.
Comments
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John M
The poor lighting makes it hard to see the animation
James Choi
Too dark, I can't see anything.
Richard Adams
Way too dim to see.
Craig Martin
The setting is good. The environment matches the characters well. The acting is a bit wooden. Its hard to feel the weight of the characters.
Sabrina
I would give this more stars if the lighting improved. You can't even see their faces
Aaron James Mongcopa
Very amazing rendering and concept, realistic. However, in my humble opinion, the animation can still be improved in terms of timing and arcs. Thanks.
Jonny Strutt
I couldn't rate this higher just due to the lighting, if it's hard to see the animation it's harder to judge it.
Taylor
Would have liked a brighter render to see the character performance more clearly.