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mother and daughter talking

by Lucas

Final Rating: 4.47. Finished #29 out of 53 entries.

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Animator

Lucas

Experience

None.Just started learning.

Time Taken

over 20h

Description

i just started learning animation by watching videos on youtube and i dont have much time for pratice. but i am not afraid of critcs. im all ears.

Comments

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Sabrina

Lip sync is off. And the arms on "your future" looks like she's being sassy... it doesn't make sense

Aaron James Mongcopa

Needs some hold poses to establish the beat of the animation.

Nidhi shah

Basic idea...lot of scope for improvement animation and idea both wise

jem

I like it. Could use more exaggerated expressions though.

Jonny Strutt

'and you're future' made be laugh with the acting, although I couldn't tell if that was intentional.

Lea

Apart from the head-jerk at around 130, the body language is alright. The lipsync however needs revising, it's all over the place.