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This is about you Abigail...
by marco
Description
A dialogue between mother and daughter
Comments
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Elisabeth Janerka
Nice animation, but the composition of these shots are quite awkward and they feel very tight in a bad way which comes with the characters' heads tangent the frame throughtout.
Fredrik Larsson
Really solid foundation and the secondary motion is great too.
I would try and add some anticipation and follow through on the poses though, try and avoid the look you get with just auto tangents between the poses.
Sharu.
Some nice moves there. Just hold on to few keys, and it will be great...