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plot twist
the mother is dating the daughters friend trudy.
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Gaucelm De Villaret
An interesting idea and nice staging, but it lacks animation.
Jonathan Fontaine
You don't need the big camera move at the start, your staging is clear engough so we see the picture in the frame anyway
good story ;)
Kyra Simone
Nice camerawork on the first section. The cut is very jarring. Probably need to pick one of the two shots at the end. Leave a little time after an action (mostly talking about the eyeroll at 115... and she reacts before her friend even says anything!) to help it set in. I like the subtlety of the poses of the first character but it can get jerky towards the edge of the shot.