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Unfinished Business
An clumsy work involving counseling from peers and known workers. Clearly unfinished and needs improvement. I won't sugarcoat it. At the very least it's better than nothing at all.
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[user]
I like the idea you're going with for the scene. It could really benefit from some mouth movement and better walking motion, however.
Gaucelm De Villaret
Why didn't you animate mouths? If there was body language to go along with it, it could have compensated, but there isn't that...
Israel Silva
This could have been great with the mouths. A big part of this competition and character animation for that matter, is lipsync! Keep up the good work.
Brian
Looks like rough blocking but not finished.





