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Should I?

by Piotr

Final Rating: 4.12. Finished #35 out of 51 entries.

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Animator

Piotr

Experience

A few years

Time Taken

Three weeks

Description

This is my first entry. I'm pretty new to animating acting shots, I'm looking for any opportunity to improve.

Comments

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Gaucelm De Villaret

She goes through motions, but they feel weird and it's tough to tell her emotions. The non-connected shadow is also a bit distracting. There is an interesting idea about doing atmospheric lighting, but it could be done better.

Kai Saunders

Poses are good for the most part, probably should try more natural movements and do more with the hands mostly the fingers since the seem stiff