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Boat
by Bernard Ting
A man try to find the place he spend with his dad when he was a child .
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Nathaniel Vaughan
So, he's narrating to himself in his head, but by the end he's talking out loud?
Sure, ok.
VINCENT Nathan
a good job i think the acting is good but the staging can be a little better by making more decisions by not always showing the subject in the center of the screen but good job!
Deva Satvika
Nice idea
For the animation, it could use more body movement, give hand some hold before grabbing the lever and then go down with arc, and add some movement on the neck and body at the end of the shot.
Ryan Williams
Staging is good. Timing and lip sync need work.