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Trip Idea
by Brandon
Description
A guy is suggesting a trip to Sparrow Lake. He is using a tablet to show a second person (out of screen) the Lake on Google Maps.
Comments
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VINCENT Nathan
a good job the acting and the idea is good even if it can be maybe a little better
Ryan Williams
Good idea overall. Swims a little from pose to pose.
Ben Zingo
pretty good, but also feels a bit stiff/linear. Make sure you add in anticipation, overshoot, settling, etc. to help your character feel more organic & natural!
Exaggerating the mouth shapes & bringing the corners of the mouth in & out might help it feel a little more flexible