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Sparrow Lake
Description
A man resminicing his past.
Comments
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VINCENT Nathan
good idea but it need a little more work on the acting and more work on lip sync above all
Ryan Williams
The lip sync needs to articulate the dialogue more. The body animation may be stylized for effect, but I find it distracting.
Deva Satvika
The movement is still floaty, check the timing and try to plan and make video references for your animation so you can pose it better.