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Bad News

by Alex Campbell

Final Rating: 3.48. Finished #120 out of 173 entries.

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Animator

Alex Campbell

Experience

3 months

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

Carrie gets some bad news. The person on the other end of the line and Saul; just don't get it.

Comments

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Richard Carrillo

You need to stretch and squash the face more. Give a little more movment to the eyes and eyebrows. Try acting it all out yourself and use it as reference, or take a look at the original footage.

Amartya Mukherji

A lot of polishing needs to be done. feels a bit pose to pose now. You could have pushed your poses and animation further to match the intensity and energy of the dialogue.

Juan Carlos A C

Needs acting. Is always moving like bubbles or like an astronaut on vacuum space