First Attempt

Name: First Attempt
Duration: 13 s
Channel: Jonny
Description: There are so many things I need to fix with this. I'll probably spend another month polishing it up but I wanted to submit something since I've spent the xmas period working on it.

by Jonny

Final Rating: 5.28. Finished #36 out of 173 entries.

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Animator

Jonny

Experience

3 years

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

There are so many things I need to fix with this. I'll probably spend another month polishing it up but I wanted to submit something since I've spent the xmas period working on it.

Comments

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Amol Wagh

Good work with staging and camera. Expressions are very good. You can improve it with more practice!

Elizabeth Harding

I would do some off setting, both men look up/at her as she is turning towards them, it's very synchronized.