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Carrie
by Joshua Clay
Decided on 2D to test out toonboom, Carrie really needs to settle!
Comments
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Reginald Crumpler
Eye blinking needed.
Richard Carrillo
Try animating next time.
Tobias Egeli
not to bad lip aniam, but i realy think you should start by doing more 12 principle stuff. nail the basic and you are on a good path i think
Bryan Stone
Lip-sync is good, but lack of character kills this one.
Deven Ramesh Bhosale
better next time.
Jez
Ha ha what a stare
Ruud Harbers
Why not add some eye blinks? The only things that move are their mouths. :-)
J.K. Riki
You might consider ignoring all coloring and "final lines" and especially lip sync until you really get some animation going in rough form. Right now this is hardly even animation, it's just swapping mouths on a still image. Work much, much looser and get movement on screen before you do any clean up, and you'll end up with a much better end result. Good luck with future entries, keep at it!