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Upset Fish
by Derek Rich
Glad to be part of the competition.
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Amol Wagh
You have created quite a drama with those characters. Nice work!
You can work more on the facial expressions of the guy. Eyebrows especially, they are not moving as fluid as necessary.
Bryan Stone
I like this. lip-sync is good, humor and actions flow well. I'm not a camera-ite so I can overlook the errors there. A fun view.
Amartya Mukherji
The blue character is better but the other guy is not proper at all. It Needs a lot of improvement The arcs are not proper. flow is missing. Timing also is off. Needs a lot of improvement. but nice try. :)
Enrico Westley
I like the fish, although I don't understand the "story" you're trying to tell. It could use some finessing.
Jassmany Diaz-Butron
i like the fish !
Benjamin Berg
The fish animation is decent but the human character feels bland and is very stiff.