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Intervention
Carrie is struggling with her personal demons during a drug intervention.
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Lee
I really like how this piece is looking! its a bit floaty and the lip sync should be worked on, but i like how it is and i think your acting choices are nice. One thing to consider next time is your composition- right now your character is dead center in the middle, try the rule of thirds
Enrico Westley
I think you need stronger poses (beats), and more poses (anticipation, moving holds, etc). You're also lacking a lot of the fundamentals, and I believe you need to focus on the basics (12 Principles).
Juan Carlos A C
It was almost done!! Just needs the clean up. A little bit of timing, curves and the "Tell him!!" is soft, it needs to be stronger.
Matt Horstman
Love the lip sync but the body lacks in character. Need more motion to tell us what she's feeling.