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December Competition
Description
A woman telling a guy in a park that she does not want to commit to settling down.
Comments
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Eddie Higgenbottom
poor animation
Enrico Westley
Needs more story-telling poses, and that will make it more appealing.
Juan Carlos A C
nothing work in here. But, I must say, that a short film with a funny script and this direction and acting could be very funny.
Aaron McGriff
Staging needs some work and the camera moves are jarring and unnecessary. Focusing on the character performance more would help.
Jez
I don't think we need those camera moves