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You're not yourself.....

by Jerry Graham

Final Rating: 3.30. Finished #127 out of 173 entries.

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Animator

Jerry Graham

Experience

3 years

Time Taken

3 weeks, evenings only.

Description

Carrie isn't sure what she's looking for but she'll know it when she finds it.

Comments

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Vinicius Correa

The hands are moving at the same time, giving an impression of symmetry. Try to set different timing for them. Keep going!

Rahul Rishikesh

i dont think the audio tells us about a happy girl...;) animation is a bit laggy...no anticipation and need to work on timing...poses looks good and good effort to bring a 3rd character...keep working hard...:)happy new year!

Amartya Mukherji

Lacks fundamentals

Michal Nowacki

like you idea of setting up the scene, pity its not finished would

Brooke Wagstaff

She is moving around quite a lot--it will be easier to focus on her if you give her some moving holds (like you did with him).

Jez

LOL

Jerry Graham

Man, my lighting/render on this sucks. It's not the best animation, but I could have improved it hugely with a better render.