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Carrie Settle Down

by Taty Correa

Final Rating: 3.65. Finished #110 out of 173 entries.

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Animator

Taty Correa

Experience

3 months

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

Her fiance's two best friends come to deliver bad news to Carrie that he didn't make out of the war. Carrie devastated , she goes into a mental break down.

Comments

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Richard Carrillo

Same as others with this rig

Amartya Mukherji



Lacks fundamentals

adam

like the charcter

Enrico Westley

One of the better animation give seen with this rig. However, you should try posing that spine more --that's where the real "core" of the performance begins to show itself.

J.K. Riki

You want to watch your twinning, things are moving much too evenly and mirrored. The composition isn't bad, so just work on getting your poses to be more dynamic and not so twinned and you'll get a better result. Good luck with you future entries, keep at it!

Jassmany Diaz-Butron

I would try to dont make move the arms, or whatever at the same time.
Good work though !

Benjamin Berg

Very generic and uninteresting poses. Don't forget to add in overlap and work on your arcs. Also, take a look at the eyes and eyebrows.