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The Bar

by Raúl

Final Rating: 3.56. Finished #116 out of 173 entries.

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Animator

Raúl

Experience

1 year

Time Taken

1 week

Description

The drink does not make us look like we really are.

In the scene the waiter and an alcoholic woman pointing the beaker.

The error that the hand relayed the table is obvious. My apologies.

All corrections are welcome. ;) Thx <3

Comments

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Jason Abby George

nice job !
In the last section from frame 268, if you could do some eye animation, the shot would look much better. Like eye could look more down to the right in the end.

Enrico Westley

Needs some TLC! Tender Love and Care... I also believe you're still in the blocking phase... Just throw more story-telling poses in there!