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Diagnosis....total schizophrenia
by Andy Cheung
The wife has just been diagnosed as suffering from schizophrenia, she has totally flipped out and the husband tries to calm her down.
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Eddie Higgenbottom
pretty origanal
Blond
The poses are a bit too exagerated...
David Hendrix Shovlin
I like your keys but I think you could push your breakdowns a lot more and have your characters sink into their poses, particularly when they're making contact.
Amartya Mukherji
Good use of Mery rig. I am looking forward for some stunning animations with this exceptional rig.
Your animation is nice. But i felt it is WIP. A lot of polishing needs to be done. feels a bit pose to pose now.
neda
very good
Benjamin Berg
The first pose in your main character is really good however after that your poses start to become very generic. As for the animation its self. I would work on polishing the shot more adding overlap working on the curves and such. Also, try to avoid camera cuts. It makes it harder to follow what is going on.