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11 Second Club December 2014
Description
Rushed entry for the December 2014 11 Second Club
Comments
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Alex Sepel
Love the world, but keep on working on your animation skills :) online tutorials will help a lot, good luck!
Adam Sirrelle
I think the camera is a too far away from the action and too much on their backs.
If the man was in the foreground, so you could see the syringe close up, and the woman was facing from more I think that'd make a better shot.
Enrico Westley
Very floaty, I also feel as though you should go back to the planning stage and re-think the performance :(
Sarah Johnson
It would be nice if the characters were facing the camera so we could see their expressions!