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Quarrel in marriage
by Charles Xu
I like this audio which remind me of some sweet memory
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Andy Cheung
Some good acting ideas. Couple of un-necessary cuts though, specifically the wide shot when she says 'tell him!' and the close up of his mouth saying 'you're not your self'.
Animation in general feels a little too linear and stiff.
Sam
great angle and the idea of the animation gets across really well. The problem is that it's just a plan so far. I really hope you'll keep working on this because it has the potential to be one of the best ones I've seen on here. :)
Enrico Westley
That camera really got in close there! Haha. Personally, I try not to move the camera so much, for it gets really busy really fast!
Jez
well I must say this 1sec EXTREME close-up looks a bit weird.