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Losing it

by Robinson Aguilera

Final Rating: 4.63. Finished #56 out of 173 entries.

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Experience

2 years of study

Time Taken

full 4 weeks

Description

Girl doesn't like what her teddy had to say

Comments

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David Hendrix Shovlin

The fact that she's floating up off the bed bothers me quite a bit. That foot should move a little.

Amartya Mukherji

Needs a lot of improvement

Michal Nowacki

very nice and dinamic

Benjamin Berg

The little guy on the right looks alright however the left character feels like she is moving too much or feels too jerky. Maybe adding some polish might help but this shot needs a lot of work.

Yurika Nishi-Imai

Love her exaggerated poses; some movements looked a little jerky or too fast (like when she says "down" on "I don't need to settle down) I definitely think you nailed the animation on the doll; a little bit of me wishes we could see his expressions more.
A+ on concept! Excellent work!

Jassmany Diaz-Butron

mechaniiiiiics u need. ^^ "
good work though !