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December Competition

by Youn Kim

Final Rating: 3.96. Finished #83 out of 173 entries.

295 views

Animator

Youn Kim

Experience

Want to be!

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

Hello, I would like to hear your feedback!
Thanks for watching!

Comments

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Eddie Higgenbottom

you have a dog too?

Enrico Westley

Personally, I try not to have the character standing around and waving their arms in space. Throw something in there that allows for some secondary animation.

Sarah Johnson

Are you scaling the squirrel's head up and down at the beginning? It's usually a good idea to avoid that unless you really know what you're doing, and you're doing it for a specific reason.

Benjamin Berg

Lip sync could use some work. Make sure you work on the mouth shapes. As for the rest of it, your animation is stiff and floaty in the arms and spine. The acting could use some work too.