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Flashman test
by fuyuxuan
Animator
Experience
Time is very important…i think writing down the outline on paper will be much better.
Time Taken
30h
Description
i make so many mistake in this animation, sad.But i also learn a lot.it was worth my work,my time.
Comments
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Reginald Crumpler
Everything was all 'floaty' especially at the lip sync.
Enrico Westley
Still needs to be blocked / posed. I like how you added the "thump" though! Most people forget things like that.
Jez
lip sync could be shown better and.....
Benjamin Berg
Keep working on the fundamentals. I would recommend practicing on exercises that would help you work on timing and weight.