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11秒动画
by 李佩华
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Amol Wagh
Need to add a breathing kind of animation in torso for the both characters. The staging choice is bit confusing. You could have cut this into 2-3 shots to make it more dramatic. Facial expressions needs a practice.
Enrico Westley
You definitely have a rig that can be pushed to that nth level, so I would say go back and learn how to breakdown your dialog. That way you will know your beats and able to move between those poses.
Aaron McGriff
Be sure to check your compression. The artifacts are pretty distracting on this.