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Failed Marriage Plans
by Es
Thanks to Jason Baskin for the rigs!
“Mike and Tina – Maya character rig”
Comments
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Amol Wagh
Don't deal with emotional shots without close up. This long shot made you do more work on overall staging and all the characters at the same time. You could've used close ups and working more towards the polished facial expressions.
Amartya Mukherji
Very nice presentation. Story-line is good too. But You could have polished your animation further to match the emotion, intensity and energy of the dialogue.
adam
good set up
Es
personal comment: My interpretation of the sound was a little different from the one written in the transcript.
Instead of: “Saul, tell him.": Voice Three: “Oh, darling”(a mans voice)..
Juan Carlos A C
Overreacted.
Aaron McGriff
Concept is confusing. Are they at the wedding or is he just now proposing. These two events are usually not at the same time. The center guy appears to be the minister, so I'm not really clear on what's going on which takes me out of it.
Benjamin Berg
Too much movement in the characters. Video reference would help a lot going forward.