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Her Castle on a Cloud
by Ric Atkinson
New to animation. Have been animation Studying at the DAVE School in Orlando. FL for the last 10 weeks
This is my first performance piece. About a girl who has been broken hearted
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Michael Launder
this is a great idea! some of the words and mouth shapes are hitting the mark, so i'd spend a lot of time on lip synch! really hit the timings on your ups and downs, then wides and narrows and then you'll be about 90% there! great job!
Dominic Rayner
I would normally criticise this kind of camera move but it strangely adds to the sense of losing ones mind...on drink. Happy accident. Bottle appears too rubbery, tone that down a bit. Lipsynch and expressions need work. It works though overall, so good effort.
Bryan Stone
Good.
Harihara Shrinivas
Looks good well done