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Don't mess with Malcolm

by Thomas Dibet

Final Rating: 5.20. Finished #51 out of 177 entries.

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Animator

Thomas Dibet

Experience

1 year as a student

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

Malcolm can't read quietly because of his wife. He decides to solve the problem.

Comments

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Jim P

umm... did the dude die too?

Mohammad

he died too? :D

Hugo Daniel Gamboa

I think you spend to much time on the explosion, you are missing the girl singing for the first half.

Michael Launder

movemetns are pretty floaty and the lip synch needs more attention to the opening and closing of the mouth

J.K. Riki

Definitely an unexpected story/ending!

David Alin

very far from the subject

Mohamad Rezaei

Lacks fundamentals

Dominic Rayner

Grim, very poor indeed on all counts.

Bryan Stone

Huh?

Harihara Shrinivas

Little bit improvement has to be there I have a question why you're made at the end of Animation getting explode it doesn't suits for the animation

Zim

lourd

Shark Bait

well that was different

Razam Ali

Ha ha nice but in the last the bomb effect is toooo big