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Lounge Singer

by William Monnat

Final Rating: 4.08. Finished #93 out of 177 entries.

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Animator

William Monnat

Experience

3 months

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

Lounge singer wondering why she has yet to make it big.

Comments

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Naman Aafle

Need to work on timing/holds and could've added more poses.

Michael Launder

With lip synchs work on your ups and downs first. if you nail ups and downs and then the wides and narrows of the lips your lip synch will skyrocket in quality. after those two things you'll be really close! put your hand underneath your chin and say the words in the shot. you'll be able to count how often your chin hits your hand and that can give you your timing and number of openings that the mouth will do!

Mohamad Rezaei


Needs a lot of improvement

Poornachander Adepu

lip sync isn't matched and action also too slow! but concept is good!

Bryan Stone

Okay.

Jason Cobble

The lips go fishy-face on several words. The movement should be more subtle.