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Talent Show
Please eCritique My Animate. Thank You.!!!
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Nassim Briedj
XXX ;)
Seo Ryong Jaw
nice various movement and emotions. but mouth shapes and performance doesn't sound quite match with animation..
and it seems too much use of shoulder makes feeling little bit odd
! antway good!
Michael Launder
a lot of strong animation here! next thing i would work on is cameras, staging is a really important aspect to animation, i think you cut a few too many times and the back and forth between close and far is a little disorienting.
Sarah Johnson
I appreciate the unique take on the audio here!
Bryan Stone
Too many camera cuts reduces the effectiveness of this piece.
Harihara Shrinivas
Overall everything is nice the situation is good great attempt
David Alin
animation is not bad the camera is too frantic
Poornachander Adepu
good feel
Dominic Rayner
XXX? What kind of talent does she have to show? Assuming nothing of the kind, the way she sings and her body movements seem expressive, but might fit a different kind of song rather than this. This dialogue is hard to find excellent action for it, so well done for making the effort.