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Orphan's Sorrow
by Oğuz Gül
The girl remembers her cheerful past days with her family and starts singing.
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Jim P
Penny from bolt, parents from inside out.. right? ha
Nassim Briedj
good anim but it would be better with a good lypsync
nabil
gooood
Robert Firestone
I like the camera and the render. Lipsync and eyes could use some work.
Michael Launder
timing of the mouth is spot on! now it just needs some of the narrow and wide shapes and it s a really great piece!
Paulo H. Scatena
Great animation! I only think lip sync can be improved. The jaw is a little too active on the 'not in my ca..'. I'd personally make the mouth shapes more pronounced and the jaw less - also, tongue plays a big part. Lovely atmosphere
Bryan Stone
Effective presentation.
Harihara Shrinivas
The concept is good but lipsing but you have to show more
Saish Borkar
Great camera movement
Melissa
I like it :) , you just need to improve your lipsync. (the shape of her mouth)