My Dream Girl

Michael Launder

nice key poses! looking good until the last camera! that one needs a lot more polishing, but your fundementals are there, all you need is practice

J.K. Riki

I really like the drama of the stairs and opening shot. That's something that fits well with the audio, I think. I wasn't sure what the story was, exactly, but that initial staging was a good start. :) Good luck with future entries! Keep at it.

Jez

Oh, another interesting concept, shame the animation is jerky in a couple sports

David Alin

your timing could be better but nice overall

Sarah Johnson

Plagiarized from Tangled. Not ready for competition.

Bryan Stone

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Ajay Raut

The staircase section animation is nice..poses are strong..In second and third cam hand and finger movement could be more smoother.. overall Nice one..Keep it up buddy..way to go

Steve Hawthorne

hmmm... you do realise people love and watch tangled as much as you do??

Problem, you also have, alongside the mechanics needing improving, is that this feels like a lack of context... I have no idea who she is and what she is thinking. Sorry

Jason Cobble

It starts out nice and then it gets odd and distracting. The lip-sync needs work.

Dominic Rayner

You wouldn't get this action for this line in a musical, it is too ott. Some good aspects about it are that for a more appropriate line of dialogue, the actions seem pretty interesting, sort of string puppet like.