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Angel's Cloud

by Bethany Schreiber

Final Rating: 3.63. Finished #128 out of 177 entries.

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Experience

student

Time Taken

45hrs

Description

An angel arriving to escort a newly dead man.

Unfinished piece.

Comments

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Sarah Johnson

Better lighting on the girl would really help us see the animation. As of right now, her facial expressions are hard to read.

David Alin

the camera positions are odd

Dominic Rayner

Literal cloud. OK!
Wooden animation, but decent poses which could be refined to produce a decent piece.

Bryan Stone

Give the guy more life. He feels static.