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Starwars Themed sorta
Mery singing passionately against a rock
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Rannva Macdonald Arnskov
A lot of popping joints. The camera is way to far away from the head to be able to see any lips, almost feeling like hiding the errors. The poses are unnatural, the feet are slipping and there is no balance in the model.
Michael Launder
watch that camera move, there are a lot of strong things here but that camera move makes it almost pointless you can start the whole shot from that part and when she gestures to it, then cut to a new camera thats a close up on the cloud thing with her hand in the foreground
Bryan Stone
Movements overall are floaty and needs more holds. Static camera angle for much of the piece reduces the delivery of the story.