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Tears of a Child
I have been studying 3D animation at Michigan State University for 2+ years
This took me approximately 9 days to animate
What has happened to this girl to make her heart ache so?...
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Rannva Macdonald Arnskov
The poses are really good, and the camera positions are chosen to give an as good view as possible. The lipsyncing is believable, I really like how the entire face is working together to display the emotion.
Michael Launder
good poses and lip synch! you really need to work on your camera staging, your cameras are breaking the 180 degree rule and its awkward for the viewers. also when you have a key pose like having her head on her knee, hold the whole body there for a moment. its important to have holds in animation and not have the whole body moving consistently!
David Alin
why bother putting the leg up and down? Make up your mind, it's distracting
Dominic Rayner
I have commented elsewhere that musical theatre animation acting is proving a hard one to pull off. A lot of floating through the animation it seems, with irrelevant actions. I don't want to be a harsh critic, but pose the character within it's limitations and act it through to see if these are motions and expressions that you would make when dreaming about a better world.
Bryan Stone
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