On the roof

George

I had no idea where the mouth was. If the mouth was moved over more it may of been easier to see.

Melanie Fumey

That's too bad the sound is not syncronize with your animation.

Michael Launder

you need to put the mouth farther forward, its blocked by the crutch for most of the shot

J.K. Riki

I like your character design and background art! The character was a bit floaty, mostly due to having it be a cycle and the background moving at a different rate. Fix that up and it will be a really nice piece. Good luck with future entries! :)

Michael Kristiansen

Shame the mouth is covered half the time, confused me in the beginning. Nicely done though.

Bryan Stone

For 2D its okay. Feels a bit robotic in the movements.

awata

The crutch blocking the mouth wasn't the best idea. It made you fight with the crutch to see the mouth, so it didn't flow as well as it could if the crutch was under the other arm, or if you turned the character a tad more 3/4 view to see the mouth clearly.