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cry in dark
by Rahul
first time participation in 11 second club.
hope you like it.
give you valuable feedback.
Comments
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Jim P
sad
Michael Launder
i like the subtle actions of rubbing the head! the key poses could use a little more love, also push the camera closer i want to see your great work up close!
Annie Iglesias
A sad scene, works really well with the music. I found the head shake at "no one cries" to be a little too erratic. But I like your choice for the end pose
Dominic Rayner
Lip synch is off, and the action where she looks up is a bit sudden, apart from that, a good effort
Bryan Stone
Effective for a static camera shot. I could feel the life and emotion in this one.
Sabrina Winkel
I like the emotion in this one