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An Act

by Trish

Final Rating: 2.57. Finished #169 out of 177 entries.

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Animator

Trish

Experience

Just over a year, but little in 3D Computer Generated

Time Taken

An Evening

Description

should she get the role?

Comments

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Seo Ryong Jaw

this needs fundamentals of animation

Michael Launder

really work on your cameras, usually cameras start from farther away and get closer, yours are a little opposite. also its important not to emphasize the big mouth movements, watch your family and friends when they talk. they usually dont make huge mouth movements when they talk!

Dina Mohy

too much movement in " not allowed "

Florencia Irena

maybe you need to work more with the expression, like eyebrows and mouth shape. and try not to stay still in one position too long, for example, you need to move the hand even a lil bit.

Bryan Stone

Improved, but the Camera cuts kill the overall delivery.

Dominic Rayner

Body floats too much through movements. Lipsynch timed quite well but is mechanical. Camera cuts do not add value