Castle on a cloud

Jimmy

Bart Simpson?

Michael Launder

you have some good staging and great starts here. Make sure you really study walking when trying a walk like this, there are sooo many subtle parts to a walk. If you can hit those great parts then life breathes into a character. you lip synch is close, but really concentrate on the mouth of the character opening and closing first. after that timing is correct, hit narrows and wides. after that you're 90% to a perfect lip synch.

Bryan Stone

The Don character does not fit the audio, and the lip-sync is off. Polish the movements of the character overall.