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Not to give up on life
A Small girl trying to overcome her parent's loss.
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Jim P
i get it! mr fredricksons long lost kid. you should have more references to UP.
Noyan Özkan
ahahahah shit, now thats unexpected.
Michael Launder
great work with the eyes!
Poornachander Adepu
little more fine tune needed! avoid a jerk at "not allowed"
anyway nice act
Dominic Rayner
Reasonably well animated. The trouble with musical acting is that it's timing is different to normal acting. It's another skillset to master. The entries I saw so far float through the dialogue and action too much. Few seem to grasp it. You have her getting up and looking at the floor during a line which ought to be delivered to the camera. The changes in postion add interest without being either neccessary or unneccessay. Well done however, it's a decent effort, but pay attention to the hands as well, it seems a bit busy there.
Bryan Stone
Excellent Idea, animation, emotion!
Shark Bait
nice, i would make her blink less often though, and make the blinks longer