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My castle on a cloud

by Nassim Briedj

Final Rating: 4.78. Finished #67 out of 177 entries.

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Animator

Nassim Briedj

Experience

2 years

Time Taken

11 days

Description

a sad a girl singing...

Comments

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Dina Mohy

lipsync is off, her hands are tense.

Michael Launder

really good! i'd say just study mouth movements when people talk and sing, your shapes are good theyre just a bit too extreme maybe!

Michael O'Brien

Her action on frame 200 where she "knocks" on her doll doesn't seem to relate or add anything to what she's saying/feeling. It's a little confusing. I've been told this is a tricky rig to work with, though, so nice job on the control/mechanics of the body as a whole.

Poornachander Adepu

should be change lip sync animation completely! it is not good! action was good but in between punching is no needed! it is not looking good! anyway needed more polish in action!

Bryan Stone

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Shark Bait

cool! the tongue looks a bit odd

Moussa Ishak

Nice animation !!!