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Looking to the past

by Kristopher Bossert

Final Rating: 4.21. Finished #83 out of 177 entries.

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Experience

3 Months of School

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

Your mind can do amazing things.

Comments

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Michael Launder

good work! hit your key poses a little faster it will show us some good spacing, right now the little elf feels like its in water or space or something like that, moving really slowly

Jez

Interesting

Mohamad Rezaei


Needs a lot of improvement

David Alin

the big character needs to move, otherwise it's distracting

Bryan Stone

Like It!

Seo Ryong Jaw

everything is one linear movement.. and it doesn't read why the Mery character is holding little guy like a stone..

andrzej

don`t do drugs

MikEl Maolud Smith

Dang you should've did a moving hold on the girl holding the main actor.

Dominic Rayner

Quite charming, although he takes too long to get up and touch. Pace needs variation in that regard. It is hard to assess the animation because he becomes so tiny, and because of the camera move - which is offputting in any case.

Robert Firestone

This is an interesting idea, but I'd like to see some animation on the large character, even if it's subtle.