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Singing in the bedroom
by A.A.
Girl singing and playing in her bedroom.
Comments
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Andre Nunes
nice work :)
Robert Firestone
I like the camera. Some of her poses feel a bit broken.
Evelyn Hernandez
It feels like shes moving too much, for this dialogue. Its good, but shes talking in a emotional matter that doesnt feel right with her excited like body movements.
David Alin
kind of overracted but pretty good overall
Florencia Irena
Great work!
Sarah Johnson
Nice acting! I loved the expressions you got, especially on "not in my castle"
Moussa Ishak
^^ lovely...i like it verymuch !
Bryan Stone
Is Good work.
Shark Bait
mini Mery !
Dominic Rayner
Some good animation, but fidgety actions chosen. Perhaps actions that specify the theme or story, might have been better choices. Camera move doesn't help much. But well done because your shot is in my opinion in the best 10 of 150 I watched so far.