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Don't Cry, Mum

by Nafisah

Final Rating: 4.56. Finished #74 out of 177 entries.

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Animator

Nafisah

Experience

3 years

Time Taken

5 days

Description

Kayla felt heart broken when she watched her mother cry. She then sang this song....

Comments

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Michael Launder

the sublte motions in this project are great! feels alive to me! the only part that was awkward was when the girl was shaking her head, the eyes are so big that they moved like crazy, maybe make the head shake more subtle or find a way to frame the shot so that the movement seems less significant! well done!

David Alin

Nice but there's no contrast in her motion. Things should be faster and other slower. Here everything looks slow.

Mohamad Rezaei


Needs a lot of improvement

Paulo H. Scatena

I can see great care was put into the lip sync and it looks really good. I personally think body animation can be a little sharper. It feels a little "spliny"

Bryan Stone

Just a bit of polish needed.

MikEl Maolud Smith

Good lip sync...not bad. Just wish there was an angle or a change is plot. something. But simply good.