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Frindes
by vahid
Description
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Comments
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Gerben Brandsma
The movements fit well to the dialogue, but could use some anticipation and follow-through.
Thomas Thoma
Nice story! I especially like the final shot. Something you can improve upon is the gesture at frame 166 which is mirroring the one at 42, and the one at 196 gets a little repetitive. In my opinion the piece will be stronger without these big hand gestures. Lip sync wise there are some "O" and "U" shapes missing. Overall this is one of my favorites. Congrats.





