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Science Experiment

by Lauren McKinley

Final Rating: 5.22. Finished #37 out of 118 entries.

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Animator

Lauren McKinley

Experience

1 year college experience

Time Taken

12 days

Description

A scientist is comforted by his friend after a "failed" experiment.

Comments

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Clara Myers

Tiny cactus!! I liked your story. And quote my 5-year-old sister, "I loved it so much! Can we do it again?"

Tim

The clear story here is nice. The facial expressions are very clear and easy to read. Lip sync is decent. The way the scientist holds himself seems a little too chipper for the dialogue. He is admitting he's inferior yet his body posture says that he's confident.