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DECEMBER COMPETITION 2016

by amol

Final Rating: 4.21. Finished #69 out of 118 entries.

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Animator

amol

Experience

4 years

Time Taken

8 days

Description

father and son conversation

Comments

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Lauren McKinley

The animation in this is pretty good, but if the actions were more emphasised or exaggerated it would be a lot more interesting. : )

Karl Pontau

characters seem stiff.

Clara Myers

More exaggeration in the characters' expressions would help this a lot!

Christoph Lendenfeld

i like the swiping hand movement at frame 200, but holding the index finger like at frame 250 is soooo cliche and doesn't really fit the scene imo

Sthefany Briceño

Nice work need to make more expression on the faces